ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
Deviation Actions
Literature Text
We searched the surface of the earth
for the purpose of our birth
Carefully the past was excavated
and we found myths that were fabricated
Next we looked to the sky
to learn what happens after we die
Wax melted, wings failed
turbines stopped, pilots bailed
Maybe the answers hide in the stars
Lets spend 300 billion and fly to Mars
Challenger exploded on the way up
Columbia returned but began to break up
We are running out of places to look
but the answers lie in one Holy Book
The Truth was and is an only Son,
an easily overlooked one.
for the purpose of our birth
Carefully the past was excavated
and we found myths that were fabricated
Next we looked to the sky
to learn what happens after we die
Wax melted, wings failed
turbines stopped, pilots bailed
Maybe the answers hide in the stars
Lets spend 300 billion and fly to Mars
Challenger exploded on the way up
Columbia returned but began to break up
We are running out of places to look
but the answers lie in one Holy Book
The Truth was and is an only Son,
an easily overlooked one.
A look at man's never ending, mainly fruitless, search for truth.
It rhymes, in a way.
It rhymes, in a way.
© 2004 - 2024 SomeInspiringTitle
Comments10
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Ohmygosh I love this..! I adore the message it portrays.. I've been wanting to do like, a poemish picturish maybe animation type thing about Jesus. Kinda like, you know how so many people just are all, totally anti-Christian? Like, they think it's sooo stupid and all. I want to write something where it's like, kinda like how God must feel that so many of His children like, turn away from Him. Like, kinda a, "I died for you." type message from Jesus' point of view, and not let anyone know WHO it is until the end. Like, you know, then all the atheists at first would think it was like, a normal person who died for someone they loved, and they'd be all, "Awww." then they'd find out it was actually like, how Jesus died for them because He loves them so much. <3 Some would get all uppity, but maybe it would like, I dunno, open some's eyes, or, something. o.o; Wow, now I'm just rambling. But it's so nice to meet other Christians on here, so rare, too. (For me, anyway.) XD